Can you correct my writting (ielts task 2)?

Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport.How far do you agree with this statement?

Some people think that young people should spend their free time on cultural activities such as music and theatre or film. Others believe that playing sport is better. In my opinion, culture and sport are important parts of life so young people should do mixture of bothBoth cultural activities and sport are good for their healthy as well as more active and happier. The more the participants engaged in such activities, the better they feel their physical health and mental wellbeing to be. In addition, cultural activities and sports are relaxing, freshing up your mind - making it easier to cope with stress a hard working day so may improve mental health. In the other hand, each part gives young people the wide variety of positive benifit sides. For example, young people can not only expose themselves to unusual experiences but also help them broaden the scope of their knowledge of life through cultural activities. Do more sports, they have a lower chance of getting a serious illness and it increases young people's resistance to illness. Sport gives young people a healthy life and a fit body. Moreover,thank to getting plenty of practise with sport help our body function smoothy and more efficient.I believe that young would have lots of chances to do a variety of activities or do sport more and more so that a balance of sport and cultural activities is best