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Teh78523 Posted 15 years ago
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I am fresh graduate and actually I don’t have any experience in
Traditional Chinese Medicine. But before that I had took some TCM course like
tissue culture, production and utilization of herb medicine, special topics
in biotechnology of medicinal herbs, etc. Besides, my sister had worked in
ABC company before. So I have some basic concept about TCM. I am very interested
in this field and hope you can give me a chance to work in this company.
Although I have no experience, I am willing to learn and work smart. I look
forward to hearing from you soon.
Traditional Chinese Medicine. But before that I had took some TCM course like
tissue culture, production and utilization of herb medicine, special topics
in biotechnology of medicinal herbs, etc. Besides, my sister had worked in
ABC company before. So I have some basic concept about TCM. I am very interested
in this field and hope you can give me a chance to work in this company.
Although I have no experience, I am willing to learn and work smart. I look
forward to hearing from you soon.
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Dear Mr/Ms [surname], I am a recent graduate and have no working experience in Traditional Chinese Medicine. However, I have taken several TCM courses including tissue culture, production and utilization of herbal medicines , and special topics in the biotechnology of medicinal herbs. My sister was previously employed by ABC company, so I am somewhat familiar with the general concepts of TCM through talking with her.
- Dear Mr/Ms [surname], I am a recent graduate and have no working experience in Traditional Chinese Medicine.
- However, I have taken several TCM courses including tissue culture, production and utilization of herbal medicines , and special topics in the biotechnology of medicinal herbs.
- My sister was previously employed by ABC company, so I am somewhat familiar with the general concepts of TCM through talking with her.
- I am very interested in this field, and I hope you can give me the opportunity of working with you.
- I am willing to learn and work hard.
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Dear Mr/Ms [surname],
I am a recent graduate and have no working experience in Traditional Chinese Medicine. However, I have taken several TCM courses including tissue culture, production and utilization of herbal medicines, and special topics in the biotechnology of medicinal herbs. My sister was previously employed by ABC company, so
I am a recent graduate and have no working experience in Traditional Chinese Medicine. However, I have taken several TCM courses including tissue culture, production and utilization of herbal medicines, and special topics in the biotechnology of medicinal herbs. My sister was previously employed by ABC company, so
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