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Khm1710 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Can you correct my sentences...?

I have self- Introduction report. But I am not good at grammar. So please read my sentences and correct the wrong points.

Hello my name is Kim So Hyunh. And my english name is Albert.
I was born in 1993. I'm freshman in Chunang University. Before I came to Seoul to become college student, I resided in Daegu. So at present, I live in rented room alone.
Last year I studied in private education institute to re-challenge Korean SAT. That was very hard time for me. My hobby is playing soccer and I also enjoy watching movie or listening music. Of course I often appreciate current pop music but I prefer old pop to new things
My short term aim is entering law school. And I hope that will be accomplished. I will study hard to realize my goal.
Thank you for listening.
  

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khm1710 Hello my name is Kim So Hyunh. And my english name is Albert. , and my English name is Albert.

  • khm1710 Hello my name is Kim So Hyunh.
  • And my english name is Albert.
  • , and my English name is Albert.
  • khm1710 I'm freshman in Chunang University.
  • I'm a freshman at the Chunang University.
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khm1710Hello my name is Kim So Hyunh. And my english name is Albert.
Hello, my name is..., and my English name is Albert.
khm1710I'm freshman in Chunang University.
I'm a freshman at the Chunang University.
khm1710Before I came to Seoul to become college student, I resided in Daegu. So at present, I l
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khm1710My short term aim is entering law school.
a law school
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Just something that noticed at once. Can be brushed up more though...

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