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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago

Can you correct my poem?

Although I suffer, I still know you are here
Although I've sinned, I still know you are near
The pain of hurting you is endless
Knowing that you are the one to whom I live for
The pain of hurting you is endless
Believing that you are the one to whom I adore

Everything I've been through, every tear I've cried
You were always there for me, knowing how much I've tried.
The pain of hurting you is endless,
Because although I tried, I never really believed.
In your grace and power until now that my relationship with you has been achieved.

I admit that I've sinned and suffered constant pain on this earth
I know that I have said that I was a mistake since birth
The pain of hurting you is endless
You always pull me through
The pain of hurting you is endless
So I will choose to love, honor and live according to you.
  
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