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You've spent several semesters at school working hard and have decided to take a trip during spring break. You and your friends know where you're going, what you plan to wear, and whom you plan to meet while you're there. But did anyone think about what to do if something unexpected happens while you're traveling? You do research for all your school assignments, so why not for your vacation? First of all traveling is visiting interesting places and meeting new people. It is connected with getting to know other cultures and traditions which is surely valuable. Visiting other countries abroad can help people of all ages learn languages, so that they broaden their experiences.. Secondly, it is usually said that journeys educate, so traveling we can expand our general knowledge. Also we become open-minded , tolerant and ready to cope with surrounding world if we learn something while being in journey. Furthermore, traveling is a psychological necessity, especially for people who have stressful jobs. Let’s thing about the tourists who coming in droves . As a result of that you can fall prey to conmen. Thieves know exactly what to look for when they're attempting to snag your purse or wallet. Have you ever thought what're the effects on people's communication skills? They frequently feel nervous, either through excitement or through anxiety about what is to come. How often has one heard: where I come from, it isn’t done like this or we do it this way? Not only can we have negative experience when we visit the country but the place itself may be noisy and overcrowded. As a result of the high-interest place this leads to higher prices , traffic jams and the traditions change. People do everything because to earn money .And as the photograph shows , traveling is a very good way of spending time. It can educate, give impressions, nice memories and let make friends. It’s your call ,but I hope that I have at least made you think!