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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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0 Hello friends. 02 br
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00 Can you correct my mistakes ??? 02 br
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00 I am going to go to America this summer for Work & Travel but I am speaking a little English. 02 br
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00 My English level yet elementary but I will Intermediate level after 5 months. 02 br
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00 Now !!! I need your help. 02 br
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00 Dear my teacher. You know. I'm Die & Mold Designer. Your family's job. 02 br
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00 if you talk your family for me. I want working your family's company for to be under training ( 20 days ) 02 br
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01 i 00 - or internship - I'm sorry I don't now 05 0 02 i 02 br
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00 I know. I speak a little English but I will speak better English because My English teacher very much teach. We are very lucky students. 02 br
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00 I used CNC Wire Erosion Machine 3 years. 02 br
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00 I used CNC Milling Machine 6 months . I using very good of Universal Milling, Turning and Drilling 02 br
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00 I have a good knowledge of SolidWorks and AutoCAD 02 br
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00 I have a good knowledge Die Cutting Design. 02 br
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00 I want to learn your family's company address. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much for you were help me... 010id 6
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00 Can you correct my mistakes ??? 02 br
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00 I am going to go to America this summer for Work & Travel but I am speaking a little English. 02 br
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00 My English level yet elementary but I will Intermediate level after 5 months. 02 br
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00 Now !!! I need your help. 02 br
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01 i 00 ________________________________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br
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00 02 br
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00 Dear my teacher. You know. I'm Die & Mold Designer. Your family's job. 02 br
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00 if you talk your family for me. I want working your family's company for to be under training ( 20 days ) 02 br
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01 i 00 - or internship - I'm sorry I don't now 05 0 02 i 02 br
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00 I know. I speak a little English but I will speak better English because My English teacher very much teach. We are very lucky students. 02 br
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00 I used CNC Wire Erosion Machine 3 years. 02 br
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00 I used CNC Milling Machine 6 months . I using very good of Universal Milling, Turning and Drilling 02 br
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00 I have a good knowledge of SolidWorks and AutoCAD 02 br
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00 I have a good knowledge Die Cutting Design. 02 br
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00 I want to learn your family's company address. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much for you were help me... 010id 6
Top answer
0 You need to learn how to use full stops/periods correctly. 02 br 02 br 00 Dear my teacher. 02 br 02 br 00 I know I only speak a little English at the moment but I will improve as my English teacher is very good.
- 0 You need to learn how to use full stops/periods correctly.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Dear my teacher.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I know I only speak a little English at the moment but I will improve as my English teacher is very good.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I used a CNC Milling Machine for 6 months.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I would like to learn your family's company address.
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0 You need to learn how to use full stops/periods correctly. Only use them at the end of a sentence. 02 br
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00 Dear my teacher. 02 br
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00 You know that I'm a Die & Mold Designer, which is the industry your family is involved in. 02 br
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00 I wondered if you would talk to your family for me as I would like to do a 20-day internship at
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00 Dear my teacher. 02 br
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00 You know that I'm a Die & Mold Designer, which is the industry your family is involved in. 02 br
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00 I wondered if you would talk to your family for me as I would like to do a 20-day internship at
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