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On 26 April 1986 at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in Ukraine, a nuclear accident cause 800,000 people suffered by radiation exposure. The use of nuclear technology for peaceful purposes carries serious risks and mistake.
Although 16% of world's electricity now comes from it, nuclear waste, cancer,high cost nuclear plant gives a hazard to human and environment.
Nuclear waste takes 240,000years to decays, and we should spend our source on a better and safe concept.

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On 26 April 1986 at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in Ukraine, a nuclear accident cause 800,000 people suffered by radiation exposure. The use of nuclear technology for peaceful purposes carries serious risks and mistake. Although 16% of world's electricity now comes from it, nuclear waste, cancer,high cost nuclear plant gives a hazard to human and environment.

  • On 26 April 1986 at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in Ukraine, a nuclear accident cause 800,000 people suffered by radiation exposure.
  • The use of nuclear technology for peaceful purposes carries serious risks and mistake.
  • Although 16% of world's electricity now comes from it, nuclear waste, cancer,high cost nuclear plant gives a hazard to human and environment.
  • Nuclear waste takes 240,000years to decays, and we should spend our source on a better and safe concept.
  • On 26 April 1986, at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in the Ukraine, a nuclear accident caused 800,000 people to suffer from radiation exposure.
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On 26 April 1986 at the Chernobyl Nuclear Power Plant in Ukraine, a nuclear accident cause 800,000 people suffered by radiation exposure. The use of nuclear technology for peaceful purposes carries serious risks and mistake.
Although 16% of world's electricity now comes from it, nuclear waste, cancer,high cost nuclear plant gives a hazard to human and environment.
Nuclear waste takes 240,

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