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Ahmed's Experience in Spain

All his school life, Ahmed had wished to go abroad for studying engineering .
But he could not go since his parents were poor. They could not afford to send him anywhere .
Ahmed worked hard in school life . Then he got a diploma in mechanical engineering .
Ahmed started to search for a job. He was lucky because he found a job in Spain.

When he arrived in Spain, he felt excited . After few days , he found many difficulties .
The biggest problem was the language . He could not speak Spanish at all .
At work, Ahmed would speak English all the time . As long as he could not talk to anyone after work , he felt homesick and lonely .
Ahmed had to live with company workers and he felt uneasy there . Ahmed used to work for long hours .
Fortunately, Ahmed got an admission in a language school . He made some good friends there .

Now one year has passed . He has learned a lot of Spanish language .
Ahmed can talk to people without any difficulty . He has changed his accommodation .
Today , he lives with his friend . Ahmed plans to settle there permanently .
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