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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Hi All,
Writing an email to reschedule an interview and would like to know if the following is okay.
Thank you so much!!
Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview. I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
However, I am writing to inquire if there is any possibility of rescheduling the day/time for the interview. I am very much interested in this position, yet unfortunately, the times coincide with the classes I am teaching. Additionally, I will be travelling all day on Thursday, March 22 to attend the XXXXX conference in San Francisco on Friday, March 23. I have noticed that your school will be attending the conference and if you would like to schedule a face-to face interview on that day, I will gladly make myself available at any time of the day. Furthermore, I will be available on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday starting at 2pm (Pacific Standard Time).
I apologize for any difficulty this rescheduling may cause and look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Writing an email to reschedule an interview and would like to know if the following is okay.
Thank you so much!!
Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview. I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
However, I am writing to inquire if there is any possibility of rescheduling the day/time for the interview. I am very much interested in this position, yet unfortunately, the times coincide with the classes I am teaching. Additionally, I will be travelling all day on Thursday, March 22 to attend the XXXXX conference in San Francisco on Friday, March 23. I have noticed that your school will be attending the conference and if you would like to schedule a face-to face interview on that day, I will gladly make myself available at any time of the day. Furthermore, I will be available on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday starting at 2pm (Pacific Standard Time).
I apologize for any difficulty this rescheduling may cause and look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Top answer
It is quite good. I have only one suggestion: Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview. I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
- It is quite good.
- I have only one suggestion: Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview.
- I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
- However, I am writing to inquire if there is any possibility of rescheduling the day/time for the interview.
- I am very much interested in this position, yet unfortunately, the times coincide with the classes I am teaching.
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It is quite good. I have only one suggestion:
Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview. I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
However, I am writing to inquire if there is any possibility of rescheduling the day/time for the interview. I am very much interested in this p
Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity of a personal interview. I would be delighted to discuss with you further my application for the French Teacher/Department Chair position.
However, I am writing to inquire if there is any possibility of rescheduling the day/time for the interview. I am very much interested in this p
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