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Latomiseur Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Can you correct me please ?

Hi everybody ! I actually want to have a better level in English, so, it could be cool if you guys can correct and rephrase what I write. Thanks !


Frederic wasn't a man like the others, he was special... All what he needs is.... a bridge ! Yes, a bridge ! Why a bridge ? And why not ! There questions we can't respond... So, he wanted a bridge, he needed a bridge, he will have a bridge ! All begins that night... There was a party between rich men. Frederic was modest in his manners, even though he was the richest of all, but there was a problem... He saw a strange man... He wasn't tall, he was apparently scared. Dirty and stinky, they're dishonoring the Human race ! This was unusual... So, he asked a person who was next to him :

-What is this thing ? I never saw as strange as this before...

-It's... a poor...sire...

-A poo... poor ? Sounds like "poo", isn't it funny ?

-... They are many.

-Where do they live ?

-On the other side of the river...

-What is the best mean to join them ?

-I hope for you you know how to swim.

-Nah, I need a bridge.

-???

-Enough talk, let's kill.

  
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