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Pucca Posted 20 years ago
I have to write a letter to a friend persuading him/her to make the road to Santiago with me..
mm..my English is not really good, so, sorry for the mistakes I´ll make!!
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Dear ____,
Sorry for not getting round to writing sooner, but I´ve been snowed under with lot of things!I´m writing to remind you that you owe me one!If you want to know what is it, go on reading!!
Firstly, I´d like to tell you that you´d have a lot on your plate during the Summer! Guess what I´ve thought about? Why don´t we make the road to Santiago?! There we can talk about all the things that happened these months, make up all those moments that we´ve been separated and the best of all, we would have time for us!!Not only can it be our best Summer, but also it would be a challenge! On top of that we would meet people from all over the world, and who knows? If we get on well with them, we can call on them the next year! Come on, I know that you wish to make that road as much as I want since you´re mad of challenges and walks!!What do you reckon? Would you be able to finish the road?
Drop me a line and let me know if you would come with me!
Lots of love,
Ana
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Thank you in advance for your help!!:D:D
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Can you correct it, plz??
I have to write a letter to a friend persuading him/her to make the road to Santiago with me..
mm..my English is not really good, so, sorry for the mistakes I´ll make!!
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Dear ____,
Sorry for not getting round to writing sooner, but I´ve been snowed under with lot of things!I´m writing to remind you that you owe me one!If you want to know what is it, go on reading!!
Firstly, I´d like to tell you that you´d have a lot on your plate during the Summer! Guess what I´ve thought about? Why don´t we make the road to Santiago?! There we can talk about all the things that happened these months, make up all those moments that we´ve been separated and the best of all, we would have time for us!!Not only can it be our best Summer, but also it would be a challenge! On top of that we would meet people from all over the world, and who knows? If we get on well with them, we can call on them the next year! Come on, I know that you wish to make that road as much as I want since you´re mad of challenges and walks!!What do you reckon? Would you be able to finish the road?
Drop me a line and let me know if you would come with me!
Lots of love,
Ana
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Thank you in advance for your help!!:D:D
Top answer
I think this is a good letter. Personally I'd drop all but one or two of the exclamation marks as they make you sound a bit frantic. If you want to know what it is, go on reading!!
- I think this is a good letter.
- Personally I'd drop all but one or two of the exclamation marks as they make you sound a bit frantic.
- If you want to know what it is, go on reading!!
- Firstly, I´d like to tell you that you´ll have a lot on your plate during the Summer!
- Guess what I´ve thought of?
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I think this is a good letter. Personally I'd drop all but one or two of the exclamation marks as they make you sound a bit frantic.
Dear ____,
Sorry for not getting round to writing sooner, but I´ve been snowed under with lot of things!I´m writing to remind you that you owe me one!If you want to know what it is, go on reading!!
Firstly, I´d like to tell you that you´ll
Dear ____,
Sorry for not getting round to writing sooner, but I´ve been snowed under with lot of things!I´m writing to remind you that you owe me one!If you want to know what it is, go on reading!!
Firstly, I´d like to tell you that you´ll
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Hi Nona,
Thanks for posting and correcting my mistakes!!:D
mm..if I have to persuade, don´t I have to sound a bit frantic?:P Maybe I manage it if he/she thinks that it´s essential for me!!:D:D
Thanks again!!
Pucca
Thanks for posting and correcting my mistakes!!:D
mm..if I have to persuade, don´t I have to sound a bit frantic?:P Maybe I manage it if he/she thinks that it´s essential for me!!:D:D
Thanks again!!
Pucca
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