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The pie chart illustrates spending on seven different categories namely food, cars, petrol, restaurants, furniture, computers and books in the year 1965.

Overall, spending on food and cars accounted for the largest proportions of expenses. By contrast, the percentage of spending on computers was lowest.

44% of expenses in 1965, which accounted for the largest part, was for food while the figure for cars was lower, at 23%. However, people spend on only 10% of their expenditures on furniture.

Likewise, the proportion of petrol in the expenditures in the same time (9%) was 2% more than that of restaurants (7%). The percentage of expenses spending on books was 6% whereas expenditure on computers stood at only 1%.

To sum it up, food and cars were the two main categories people spent most percentages of money on, however, computers was the least prioritized.