can you correct grammar this sentence for me?

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I will create a link name “Business Development”. It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, place of opportunity.

Marius Hancu · Accepted Answer

I will create a link named “Business Development”. It will contain all the information which is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, (a) place of opportunity.

(a) is optional

Clive · Answer

Hi guys,

I will create a link name “Business Development”. It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, place of opportunity.

I'd like to point out another problem with the second sentence. Instead of 'and', let's make two sentences.

It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively.

It will function as a way to promote the City as a place of opportunity. My point here is that 'as a way' in the original sentence does not work because it does not really seem to 'qualify' anything.

It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively and function as a way to promote the City as a place of opportunity.

Best wishes, Clive

Anonymous · Answer

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Clive · Answer

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Anonymous · Answer

Sorry to say but mirror is not a equipment.

can you correct grammar this sentence for me?

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