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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

can you correct grammar this sentence for me?

I will create a link name “Business Development”. It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, place of opportunity.
  

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I will create a link name d “Business Development”. It will contain all the information which is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, (a) place of opportunity . (a) is optional

  • I will create a link name d “Business Development”.
  • It will contain all the information which is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, (a) place of opportunity .
  • (a) is optional
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I will create a link named “Business Development”. It will contain all the information which is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, (a) place of opportunity.

(a) is optional
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Hi guys,

I will create a link name “Business Development”. It will contain all the information that is needed to operate a business effectively and as a way to promote the City, place of opportunity.

I'd like to point out another problem with the second sentence. Instead of 'and', let's make two sentences.

It wil
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00Two years
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Sorry to say but mirror is not a equipment.

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