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AlbaSh Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Can you correct anything in this message?
There is a misunderstanding regarding my topic proposal. I am really sorry! The truth is I did not rewrite the preliminary topic proposal based on your message (I am coping that message here) : "As for your topic--I think it's just fine. As I've said, you'll have to make
sure that you design it in such a way that the area you cover is manageable in
a 15-page paper." At the same time, I asked Chris and she told me that she did not send you anything ether. So, i was assuming that didn't have to rewrite it again. However, I apologize for any confusion on my part. It is totally my fault.
The problem is that I am in New York right now and don't have my computer with me. The only thing I have is Marx's book and the other materials that we have to discuss on Tuesday. I will be back on Monday. Can I email it to you on Monday please?
sure that you design it in such a way that the area you cover is manageable in
a 15-page paper." At the same time, I asked Chris and she told me that she did not send you anything ether. So, i was assuming that didn't have to rewrite it again. However, I apologize for any confusion on my part. It is totally my fault.
The problem is that I am in New York right now and don't have my computer with me. The only thing I have is Marx's book and the other materials that we have to discuss on Tuesday. I will be back on Monday. Can I email it to you on Monday please?
Top answer
The language is clear and correct. There are a couple of "typo-type" things: Why the "carriage returns after "you'll have to make" and "is manageable in"? You missed capitalizing a personal pronoun "So, i was assuming" I'd begin a new paragraph with "At the same time".
- The language is clear and correct.
- There are a couple of "typo-type" things: Why the "carriage returns after "you'll have to make" and "is manageable in"?
- You missed capitalizing a personal pronoun "So, i was assuming" I'd begin a new paragraph with "At the same time".
- Omitted "I" - "assuming that I didn't have to" Sounds like you're in a hurry, so I won't dilly-dally.
- Thanks for joining EF, by the way.
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The language is clear and correct. There are a couple of "typo-type" things:
Why the "carriage returns after "you'll have to make" and "is manageable in"?
You missed capitalizing a personal pronoun "So, i was assuming"
I'd begin a new paragraph with "At the same time".
Omitted "I" - "assuming that I didn't have to"
Sounds like you're i
Why the "carriage returns after "you'll have to make" and "is manageable in"?
You missed capitalizing a personal pronoun "So, i was assuming"
I'd begin a new paragraph with "At the same time".
Omitted "I" - "assuming that I didn't have to"
Sounds like you're i
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