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Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

  I completely agree with the statement because it is adequate to the modern requirement for education. I think all pupils should listen to financial education course at school as it would be a great contribution to their future. Studying economics and finance at school would increase people’s ability for adaptation to different situations in there lives.
  Almost all people during their lives are faced with some economic problems and they should be ready to give a relevant response. Being provided with financial knowledge they are more likely to find appropriate solutions. According to recent researches it is very difficult for the majority of people to decide where to invest their money because they have insufficient fiscal skills. Therefore a bare minimum of economic education is absolutely necessary for everyone.
  For those of present pupils who will then become managers or headers of corporations it is extremely important to have a vast knowledge of finance. It is obviously impossible to lead a company or even a small department without clear understanding of rules that govern economics as a whole and in particular a market a company works in. Thus for future managers learning the bases of financial interactions might give an additional advantage.
  In order to lead a good life people have to deal with their money in an efficient way. If a person know how to manage his means he is unlikely to spend his money vainly.
  In the conclusion an economical competence is needed to anyone wants to succeed in life.