Can you check the sentence below
Can someone check the sentence below for grammatical errors, English style, wording, and my writing in general?
The conversation below:
'Are you afraid of failing?'
'No, I'm not.I fail a lot. It's unsettling, but you get used to it. Used to it so much you become oblivious to what it's like to win. So if I did win, I'd... I'd wake up.'Top answer
You need a space before beginning a new sentence. "Used to it so much …" is a fragment, and not a self-supporting one. "Oblivious" is a wrong word, and even if it was right it would be out of register.
- You need a space before beginning a new sentence.
- "Used to it so much …" is a fragment, and not a self-supporting one.
- "Oblivious" is a wrong word, and even if it was right it would be out of register.
- The rules for punctuation with the ellipsis are byzantine—I simply treat it like a word in my own writing.
- Wake up from what to what?
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You need a space before beginning a new sentence. "Used to it so much …" is a fragment, and not a self-supporting one. "Oblivious" is a wrong word, and even if it was right it would be out of register. The rules for punctuation with the ellipsis are byzantine—I simply treat it like a word in my own writing. Wake up from what to what?
'Are you afraid of failing?'
'No, I'm not. I fai
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