Can you check the sentence below
Can someone please check out the sentence below for grammatical errors, fluency, whether or not my word choice is acceptable and the level of English?
"I picked up this phone to jot down something, anything onto this app I always use to type down my thoughts - mindless, nonsensical abrupt thoughts."
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" It's OK as it is. If I were to write this, I'd add commas after anything and nonsensical , I'd use the phone or my phone rather than this phone , I'd use into instead of onto , and I'd use jot down (I know you used it earlier), write down , put down or record rather than type down . These are all nit-picks though.
- " It's OK as it is.
- If I were to write this, I'd add commas after anything and nonsensical , I'd use the phone or my phone rather than this phone , I'd use into instead of onto , and I'd use jot down (I know you used it earlier), write down , put down or record rather than type down .
- These are all nit-picks though.
- It's clear and fluent.
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Batwing"I picked up this phone to jot down something, anything onto this app I always use to type down my thoughts - mindless, nonsensical abrupt thoughts."
It's OK as it is. If I were to write this, I'd add commas after anything and nonsensical, I'd use the phone or my phone rather than this phone, I'd use into ins
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