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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Can you check the sentence?

Hi guys,

Can you teII me if wrote this correctly? The part where I used the past perfect and past simpIe tense in one sentence is what concerns me the most. Thanks

...a typical school bully who swears in front of small children and takes their money away! I was so mad. After I had thrown him out, I closed the gate and told him to go away
  

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a typical school bully who swears in front of small children and steals their money! I was so mad. After I threw him out, I slammed the gate and told him to go away.

  • a typical school bully who swears in front of small children and steals their money!
  • I was so mad.
  • After I threw him out, I slammed the gate and told him to go away.
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..a typical school bully who swears in front of small children and steals their money! I was so mad. After I threw him out, I slammed the gate and told him to go away.
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