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Layla1234 Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you check the following sentences?
I am always stressed and nervous and a bundle of nerves when I start a new job.
I don't like when people are yelling at me and shouting out some single words which I don;t understand and then I don;t know what they expect from me because they use single words not whole sentences and that makes me confused
I have just heard out your message you recorded in my voicemail that is why I am calling back to ask the reason fro your call.
I don;t like when I need to move sideways because people are hanging around from on side to the other and I am standing on the passageway.
I don't like when people are yelling at me and shouting out some single words which I don;t understand and then I don;t know what they expect from me because they use single words not whole sentences and that makes me confused
I have just heard out your message you recorded in my voicemail that is why I am calling back to ask the reason fro your call.
I don;t like when I need to move sideways because people are hanging around from on side to the other and I am standing on the passageway.
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My suggestion: I am always stressed and nervous and a bundle of nerves when I start a new job. I don't like it when people are yelling at me and shouting out single words, which I don't understand, and then I don't know what they expect from me, because they use single words, not whole sentences, and that makes me confused. I have just listened to the message you left in my voicemail, and I'm returning your call to get further details regarding the reason for your call.
- My suggestion: I am always stressed and nervous and a bundle of nerves when I start a new job.
- I don't like it when people are yelling at me and shouting out single words, which I don't understand, and then I don't know what they expect from me, because they use single words, not whole sentences, and that makes me confused.
- I have just listened to the message you left in my voicemail, and I'm returning your call to get further details regarding the reason for your call.
- I don't like it when I need to move sideways on the passageway because people are hanging around, from one side to the other, blocking the way.
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My suggestion:
I am always stressed and nervous and a bundle of nerves when I start a new job.
I don't like it when people are yelling at me and shouting out single words, which I don't understand, and then I don't know what they expect from me, because they use single words, not whole sentences, and that makes me confused.
I have just listened to the message you left in my voice
I am always stressed and nervous and a bundle of nerves when I start a new job.
I don't like it when people are yelling at me and shouting out single words, which I don't understand, and then I don't know what they expect from me, because they use single words, not whole sentences, and that makes me confused.
I have just listened to the message you left in my voice
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