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Jossx Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Can you check out my grammar?

Dangling modifiers.


Can you check out my attempts. (haha sorry, I don't have too much imagination)

Middle position

a) When some quimical substances get contact with oxygen, they became poisonous, OFTEN, with deadly effects.

b) After attending the school, Juan y maria went out together, walked a bit ,and then stopped, STILL SILENT, as if they both were afraid to speak with/to each other.

at the beginning and then at the end.

c) UPSET ABOUT HER LOOK, Constanza tried to remove the little and unnoticeable stain from her dress while the videoman walked along the red carpet, RECORDING THE CEREMONY.

Thanks in advance for your help! Emotion: smile

Regards from chile
  

Top answer

Hi, Dangling modifiers. Can you check out my attempts. (haha sorry, I don't have too much imagination) Middle position a) When some quimical chemical substances get contact come in contact with oxygen, they became poisonous, OFTEN (no comma here) with deadly effects.

  • Hi, Dangling modifiers.
  • Can you check out my attempts.
  • (haha sorry, I don't have too much imagination) Middle position a) When some quimical chemical substances get contact come in contact with oxygen, they became poisonous, OFTEN (no comma here) with deadly effects.
  • b) After attending the school, Juan and M aria went out together, walked a bit ,and then stopped, STILL SILENT, as if they both were afraid to speak with/to each other.
  • at the beginning and then at the end.
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Hi,
Dangling modifiers.

Can you check out my attempts. (haha sorry, I don't have too much imagination)

Middle position

a) When some quimical chemical substances get contact come in contact with oxygen, they became poisonous, OFTEN (no comma here) with deadly effects.

b) After attending the school,

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