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I woke up knowing it was the most important day of my life. Firstly, I got out of bed to drink a cup of coffee to awake. Today I was to have a rendezvous. We were going out to the coastal restaurant in NY. Having eaten I decided to visit a beauty salon to have my make-up, manicure and coiffure done. After I had been changed, I wanted to shop around in Walmart. I bought lots of accessorizes and an amazing evening dress. As it was already time to go home and be called on by my boyfriend, I took a taxi and went home. Then I had to dress myself and heard the door bell ring and opened the door, there was my beloved and we left together.