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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you check my writing for vocabulary and grammar?
Alex's performance in th film showed her own sad and depressed expression and she was weeping all the time in the film. And I really feel sorry for Luke and Rebecca. At the first I thought the only one who had useless(?) sympathy for them which were just supporting role was me. But everybody who watched it said they felt sorry for them on the review. Quite many people abused(?) Matt and Lisa. A review that said in the world, there are much more people like Alex than like Matt and Lisa made me feel sad. In the film, when Alex got caught and asked "Haven't you ever imagine that someone might be loving you the way you love Lisa?" and said "I felt love for you when I first saw you the way you felt love for her when I first saw you.", I don't exactly remember the words, but it was enough for me to feel sad.
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Alex's performance in th f ilm showed her own sad and depressed expression and she was weeping all the time in the film . And I really feel sorry for Luke and Rebecca. ) sympathy for them in their which were just supporting roles.
- Alex's performance in th f ilm showed her own sad and depressed expression and she was weeping all the time in the film .
- And I really feel sorry for Luke and Rebecca.
- ) sympathy for them in their which were just supporting roles.
- was me .
- But everybody who watched it said they felt sorry for them in the ir review s .
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Alex's performance in th film showed her own sad and depressed expression and she was weeping all the time in the film. And I really feel sorry for Luke and Rebecca. At the first I thought I was the only one who had useless(?) sympathy for them in their which were just supporting roles. was me
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'the only one who had useless sympathy for them in their supporting roles was me' sounds unnatural?
You made it 'I was the only one who~' because the subject in my original sentence is too long?
You made it 'I was the only one who~' because the subject in my original sentence is too long?
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domdom'the only one who had useless sympathy for them in their supporting roles was me' sounds unnatural?This version is OK.
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Thank you. Can I ask one more?
One review that said in the world, there aremuch many more people like Alex than like Matt and Lisa made me feel sad.
Why this sentence doesn't need 'made me feel sad'? And 'One review~ than like Matt and Lisa' is subject here.
One review that said in the world, there are
Why this sentence doesn't need 'made me feel sad'? And 'One review~ than like Matt and Lisa' is subject here.
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Your sentence confused me. The non-defining clause should be set off by commas:
One review, which said that there are many more people like Alex than like Matt and Lisa in the world, made me feel sad.
One review, which said that there are many more people like Alex than like Matt and Lisa in the world, made me feel sad.
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