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The numbers below show basic information about uses of leisure time among different age groups.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

PASTIMES BY AGE

(minutes per weekend day)

	Reading	Computer (leisure time)	Sports and exercise
13-19 years old	5	75	60
20-65 years old	30	30	120
66+ years old	60	30	20

The table indicates fundamental data about activities in the spare time of three different groups.

It encompasses a 13-19-year-old group, a 20-65-year-old group, and an above 66-year-old group. Each group spend disparate time reading, using the computer, and working out.

The young are not avid readers because they merely use 5 minutes per weekend day to read while the time they use the computer is 75 minutes. By contrast, the old spend an hour reading and half an hour using the computer. The middle-age group spends the same time both reading and utilizing the computer, 30 minutes.

The amount of time the 20-65-year-old group spends on sports and exercise is 2 hours which is double the amount of time spent by the young group. The old group's expenditure on workout is only 20 minutes, which is one- third the young’s.