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Topic: The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019
The diagram reveals information about the outcome of the outline of the young people who use their smartphones for major reasons in particular Africa from 2016 to 2019. Overall, teenagers almost use their phone for social networking and followed by email. However, the digital camera was less accessed by the youngsters over the period.
On the one hand, in 2016, the social network was dominant, accounting for 50 percent, prior to decreasing by 2% and there was increasing slightly more than a half between 2018 and 2019. In contrast, the proportion of people who used their phones for digital cameras is almost 10 percent but later went up approximately 13%. Therefore, there was decreased slowly by about 2% and in 2019, the percentage of users hit a low of a tiny number.
On the other hand, email stand in the second with the young people use most with 25 percent and there was declined sizably with 19 percent over 3 years. Secondly, the phone calls were staying in the third with a fifth and there continuously increase fast from 15 to 20. Moreover, at the end of the period, there was overcame email which stood behind social media.
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0Topic: The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019
The diagram reveals information about the outcome of the outline of the young people who use their smartphones for major reasons in particular Africa from 2016 to 2019. Overall, teenagers almost use their phone for social networking and
00The length of your essay is good.
The vocabulary is quite poor and inappropriate. You have many grammatical errors and poor sentences.
You are using Task 2 vocabulary and essay structure. Task 1 is very very different. It is a math/science/ engineering task, so you must have a different vocabulary list than for the argumentative essay in Task 2.
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