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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart displays the percentage changes in average house prices in five cities in different countries namely: New York (USA), Tokyo (Japan), London (UK), Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) for a period of twelve years from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to the average house prices in 1989.
Overall, in 1990-1995, the house prices in Frankfurt increased the most significantly. However, between 1996 and 2002, the accommodation house prices in London rose considerably.
From 1990 to 1995, only house prices in Madrid and Frankfurt grew compared with house prices in 1989. Money people spend on houses in Madrid increased nearly 5% and more than 5% in London. In other cities, house prices dropped below zero percent. House prices in London and Japan decreased the most significantly to more than 7% and roughly equal to each other.
Between 1996 and 2002, most of the cities' house prices rose, especially in London. The house prices in London grew up more than 10% and as twice as the second city increased in house prices is New York. Only in Japan, house prices were still under 0% but it increased for about 3% in comparison it used to be in 1990-1995.
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nguyenmaichi The bar chart displays the percentage changes in average house prices in five cities in different countries namely: New York (USA), Tokyo (Japan), London (UK), Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) for a period of twelve years from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to the average house prices in 1989. That is not correct. There are two periods with average price data, not one period.
- nguyenmaichi The bar chart displays the percentage changes in average house prices in five cities in different countries namely: New York (USA), Tokyo (Japan), London (UK), Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) for a period of twelve years from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to the average house prices in 1989.
- That is not correct.
- There are two periods with average price data, not one period.
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nguyenmaichiThe bar chart displays the percentage changes in average house prices in five cities in different countries namely: New York (USA), Tokyo (Japan), London (UK), Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany) for a period of twelve years from 1990 to 2002 in comparison to the average house prices in 1989.
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0nguyenmaichiOverall, in 1990-1995, the house prices in Frankfurt increased the most significantly. However, between 1996 and 2002, the accommodation house prices in London rose considerably.
"accommodation house" makes no sense.
Also, in the "overall" paragraph, you need to write about the "big picture",
0From 1990 to 1995, (incorrect. The prices are not from the beginning year to the ending year. The prices are averaged over these 5 years.) In the first period, average only house prices in Madrid and Frankfurt grew compared with house prices in 1989. Money
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