Can you check my song if it's right?

Mi want drive



mi know a guys alway said mi can’t drive

because mi am a deaf
they are no fine, no agree

And no permit

they can't be beat



Mi want drive, mi want drive
Mi want drive, mi want drive



the law's got permit dat I desire
Sets the snow on hail

I want a drive, I want a drive

don’t give me a fool word

Like I said huh I can drive

I walk away from guy fool



I want drive, I want drive

I look up in sky there are no soar failed
But birds soar high as I can
Some day soon I'll make it,
Then I'll have to drive all the time

In Jamaica

Jamaica? Oh yeah I can drive



I want drive, I want drive
I want drive, I want drive

by Kevon Williams ( deaf)