Can you check my sentse correct or wrong

Hi,
Some of them emotionally have major effected by army threat them to kill.

Sorry, this has a lot of problems.
Would you like to try to say it another way? It might be better to write two sentences instead of one.

Try again, and we'll give you more advice.

Clive

I changed my sentence
i'm talking about the war emotionally effect

i say in middle paragraph

the children scared to shelling, aircraft and wounded people and some of them are threated killing by army

Hi,

The children are scared by the shelling, the aircraft and the wounded people. The army has threatened to kill some of them.

Some of the children have major emotional damage brecause the army has threatened to kill them.

I'm very sorry to read about such a terrible situation.

Best wishes, Clive

very very Thanks Sir. I find out where I made mistake