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Some meat such as red and processed meat has high fat content therefore children should eat more lean, low fat meat, such as fish and turkey.
1. Have I put the commas in the correct places?
2. Meat or meats

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

findaway1. Have I put the commas in the correct places?

No, not at all!

findaway2. Meat or meats

'Meats' is a better choice here.

Some meats, such as red meat and processed meat, have a high fat content; therefore, children should eat more lean, low-fat meats, such as fish and poultry.

Please note that neither poultry nor, especially, fish are often considered 'meat'.

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