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Stephanie. Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Can you check my sentence

Hi!

Can you check my sentence below, please?

"Over time, the boy had additional duties. His ambition was fostered. As humans grow up, their ambitions become greater."

  

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It's OK, except that we usually use the word people, not humans.

— Clive

  • It's OK, except that we usually use the word people, not humans.
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It's OK, except that we usually use the word people, not humans.

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