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Peek Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

can you check my sentence?

I want to tell that she had never seen a Celebrity before in this bar, and she had never sat next to a Celebrity. Can you tell me which sentences are correct and not.

01) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, had never sat next to a Celebrity before.
02) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, had sat next to a Celebrity before.
03) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, and had never sat next to a Celebrity before.
04) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, and had sat next to a Celebrity before.
05) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, and sat next to a Celebrity before.
06) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, or sat next to a Celebrity before.
07) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, or had sat next to a Celebrity before.
08) She had never seen a Celebrity in this bar, or had never sat next to a Celebrity before..
  

Top answer

'Celebrity' should not be capitalized. You can fix that first. Also, there should be no commas before the coordinating conjunctions.

  • 'Celebrity' should not be capitalized.
  • You can fix that first.
  • Also, there should be no commas before the coordinating conjunctions.
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'Celebrity' should not be capitalized. You can fix that first. Also, there should be no commas before the coordinating conjunctions.

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