CAn YOU check my motivation letter for Univesity!!!!!

Hello

I am new here, this is my first time to come here. I am not a native speaker english, I hope someone can give me some advices, cause the letter I wrote looks very stranger. . Thank you SO much

Statement of purpose

In 2006, I graduated from the Voronezh State Pedagogical University for the Mathematics - Informatics faculty. I have a diploma of Teacher of Mathematics and Informatics.

I always wanted to continue my life working with the computers because I think that’s my possibility to make very much in the future and make a successful career. I find this area very interesting and exciting because this is the area where people can directly interact with a computer to meet their needs. Since computers have become a part of human life and as there is no effective interaction as of now.

I feel technology is the way of the future. Technology can help the under-developed to become developed. Technology is the aid that will help countries move into the next century where all our problems will be but a distant memory. I believe that currently my knowledge of the computing world and the technology as a whole is still very limited.

But I always was interested with Organisation also. We didn’t have this subject in my faculty. This faculty Technology, Organisation and Learning is new for me and really interesting because it consist all of subjects which I interested and like! I really glad that University of Oslo has faculty where you can learn so important for me subjects together.

I want to study abroad because later I will have better possibilities to get work on other Europe Union countries and get much experience. The studying will not be hard thing for me, because all subjects are interesting and I’ve always wanted to know how to do something more than I do now. The most important thing is that I love working with computers and I want to make great career and do very much in Computer range.

From an experience abroad I am expecting a challenge in professional and personal domains and I hope to improve my in-depth knowledge, my language ability and other crucial qualifications at a distinguished university in the culturally and historically very interesting capital city of .... Getting a new perspective on my life from a foreign European country is one of my major intents. In my real life I love communicate and make new friends, so living in a new place will not be hard thing for me. I am highly interested in going abroad to enrich my knowledge and also to share wit other my culture and my language.

I would finally like to add some activities which have developed in me a permanent taste of competitiveness and also emphasized my organization skills. I have been working in children camps as an organizer for 5 years. Also I participated in a group for dances. At the university and in my high school years I was organizer of conferences, concerts, meeting, etc.. and I took also part in a project in the field of Mathematics, Informatics and Sociality.

I think Graduating abroad can change my life and can help me to make successful future because I will learn much things which I haven‘t learned before.

Sincerely,