Can you check my Motivation letter for my curriculum Vitae

Hello, Teachers! I would like to apply to master degree in Germany. I need to correct my grammar and to translate this into good English ?? Can anybody help me please?

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I was born in Seoul in 1992, the capital city of South Korea. Before I got into a university, I was struggling with a upcoming Korean SAT test as any other students did. However, like by accident, I got three certificates from only art & design universities, though I applied to quite many various majors. In fact, since when I was little I always knew I am very fond of drawing and crafting such as creative works. Just because I couldn’t get any supports in both ways of financial and moral. After since beginning of my college life, I was encouraged by new field of education, which I had been ever not educated before.

Sadly, Reality was not that simple than I expected. My college tended to focus on practical business affairs, which was great idea for most students in Korea. But I lost my motivation to study further and work in product design field. For me, Design was dreaming, creating something new and exploring.

At the my last semester, I decided to go abroad and find my ways in a whole new world. I had to work as a production worker for more than six months and luckily at the same time I could make my graduation work done. It was hard and totally miserable time. Somehow I made my decision to go to Dublin, even though I had known nothing about Ireland and even only known little on Europe. I stayed in Dublin for 6 months to learn English. I met so many multinational friends there and learnt new cultures. It was an irreplaceable experience.

After six months of general English course, I had an opportunity to stay in London for six months. It was also ??? on learning English though, I could visit several free museums and galleries in London hence the free entrance. In my personal opinion, I felt London is the city of Design. Everything in UK, even a cookie packing in a rubbish bin was adorable. Luckily I received financial aid from my family for travelling. I have been to many cities of 15 countries in Europe from East to Western. At the end, I became very multicultural person.

After being 15 months in Europe I came home again and began a web design course with a great motivation for exploring Europe more and more. After then, I graduated university and finished my 6 months Web design course at the early of 2016. I had already got an job offer from a Korean company in Germany. I had not been to Germany yet at that time though, I did not hesitated but just packed to leave. One year working as a part-time designer, I had to make my decision again whether working or quitting. It was not hard to choose one. Because I realised that I knew what I would learn and what I would like to to. After 3 months German language course in Aachen, now I am back to Korea. In this moment, I’m in search of new experiences again. As always, I would not stop learning new things, new worlds I have not been yet as long as I find that Design can make our world better.