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Peek Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you check my little passage?

Have you ever thought about after life? Once you were flying a Chopper and then you were in somewhere that you do not even know. What kind of feeling you would have if something like this happened to you? Something just happened to me. I was on a mission in Afghanistan. We were taking off from our last mission and heading for our base. I was the copilot. I looked back to make sure my friend Steve’s condition. He looked pale and mourning. He lost lots of blood and was still losing more bloods. I blinked my eyes, and opened my eyes. I was on a train. It was just like a dream. I could not believe my eyes. There was a girl in front of my seat.
There was not bad desert bloody smell pervaded around me, not anymore. I was sitting next to the windows and a girl was telling something to me. I could not catch it. She called me Sam. But my name wasn’t Sam. At that very instant someone asked my tickets. Looks liked he was checking everyone’s tickets. I did not know what to say, I gaped at him paralyzed with shocked and fear. The girl in front of me got my ticket from my right side pocket and gave it to the person who was checking the tickets. He examined the ticket and gave it back to me. I looked at the ticket. The ticket issued to a person name Sam. It perplexed me as if I was a in a maze
  
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