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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Can you check my Letter of Motivation?
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00 I need your help.....I just finish my letter of motivation for my study abroad semester. Please, can you check the grammar? Any suggestions for the content are also welcome. 02 br
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00 I really appreciate your help. If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to ask me. 02 br
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01 i 00 Dear Madam or Sir, 02 i 02 br
01 i 00 my name is *********** ********* and I am studying Industrial Engineering and Management at the University of Applied Sciences ***(name)**, *****(country)*******. I am writing this letter to apply for admission for the Study Abroad program at the *******(name)********* University of Technology, Australia. 02 br
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00 I finished my basic studies back in year 2007 and my 7th semester is supposed to be either a practical training or a Study Abroad semester. I have chosen to apply for one semester at your University in *******(city)******. 02 br
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00 Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most ambition in my life since young. I like to face the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gain cross-cultural competence. I think that one semester abroad will help me learn how to adapt to a foreign culture, mentality and way of life which in my opinion are very important for broadening one's horizon. 02 br
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00 I have never been to Australia before but I know from fellow students that Australians are very open and friendly people. The ************* television shows your beautiful countryside and the multicultural appearance of most big cities like *******(city)*******. So I chose the country wich is the most furthest away from my homeland. 02 br
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00 But the reason for choosing especially the ***************** University for my studies is based on its academic reputation and as well on the offering of courses it provides, which perfectly suit my interests. I also know from your Study Abroad Guide 2008 that the *********** University is a very international university, so I would have the opportunity to meet many students from different backgrounds and cultures. 02 br
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00 One semester in Australia will also be a great opportunity to improve my English skills. Since graduating from secondary school I regularly read English texts in newspapers, books or on the Internet, but I did not regularly have chances to talk to native speakers. As I am planning to work abroad after my graduation and, as a manager, I would like to be able to speak fluently in conversations. 02 br
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00 With my academic background and relevant studying field, I am confidence that I am qualify and able to perform well in this program. I really hope that my application for the Study Abroad program 2008 will be allowed. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely, 02 i 02 br
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00 I need your help.....I just finish my letter of motivation for my study abroad semester. Please, can you check the grammar? Any suggestions for the content are also welcome. 02 br
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00 I really appreciate your help. If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to ask me. 02 br
00 Thanks a lot! 02 br
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01 i 00 Dear Madam or Sir, 02 i 02 br
01 i 00 my name is *********** ********* and I am studying Industrial Engineering and Management at the University of Applied Sciences ***(name)**, *****(country)*******. I am writing this letter to apply for admission for the Study Abroad program at the *******(name)********* University of Technology, Australia. 02 br
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00 I finished my basic studies back in year 2007 and my 7th semester is supposed to be either a practical training or a Study Abroad semester. I have chosen to apply for one semester at your University in *******(city)******. 02 br
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00 Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most ambition in my life since young. I like to face the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gain cross-cultural competence. I think that one semester abroad will help me learn how to adapt to a foreign culture, mentality and way of life which in my opinion are very important for broadening one's horizon. 02 br
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00 I have never been to Australia before but I know from fellow students that Australians are very open and friendly people. The ************* television shows your beautiful countryside and the multicultural appearance of most big cities like *******(city)*******. So I chose the country wich is the most furthest away from my homeland. 02 br
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00 But the reason for choosing especially the ***************** University for my studies is based on its academic reputation and as well on the offering of courses it provides, which perfectly suit my interests. I also know from your Study Abroad Guide 2008 that the *********** University is a very international university, so I would have the opportunity to meet many students from different backgrounds and cultures. 02 br
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00 One semester in Australia will also be a great opportunity to improve my English skills. Since graduating from secondary school I regularly read English texts in newspapers, books or on the Internet, but I did not regularly have chances to talk to native speakers. As I am planning to work abroad after my graduation and, as a manager, I would like to be able to speak fluently in conversations. 02 br
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00 With my academic background and relevant studying field, I am confidence that I am qualify and able to perform well in this program. I really hope that my application for the Study Abroad program 2008 will be allowed. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely, 02 i 02 br
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02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Thanks 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 MM, UK 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 _________________________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Dear Madam or Sir, 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 My name is ** ** and I am studying Industrial Engineering and Management at the University of Applied Sciences ***(name)**, **(country)**. 02 br 02 br 02 i 00 01 font 00 I successfully completed 02 font 00 my 01 i 00 basic studies back 01 font 00 in the year of 02 font 00 2007 and my 7th semester is supposed to be either a practical training or a Study Abroad semester. 02 br 02 br 00 Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most ambition in my life 01 font 00 from a very young age 02 font 00 .
- 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Thanks 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 MM, UK 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 _________________________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Dear Madam or Sir, 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 My name is ** ** and I am studying Industrial Engineering and Management at the University of Applied Sciences ***(name)**, **(country)**.
- 02 br 02 br 02 i 00 01 font 00 I successfully completed 02 font 00 my 01 i 00 basic studies back 01 font 00 in the year of 02 font 00 2007 and my 7th semester is supposed to be either a practical training or a Study Abroad semester.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most ambition in my life 01 font 00 from a very young age 02 font 00 .
- I like to face the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gain cross-cultural competence.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I have never been to Australia before but I know from fellow students that Australians are very open and friendly people.
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