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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Can you check my grammar, please
Hi everybody
Can you check my grammar in the following sentences? Do I make sense in them?
If you've stayed away from smoking and stuck with your new diet plan for a month, you can return to a regular diet without adding inches to your waist and thighs. But why stop healthy diet? Once you quit smoking and started a healthy lifestyle, keep it up and eat healthier small meals as well as more fruit and veggies.
Thanks in advance
Can you check my grammar in the following sentences? Do I make sense in them?
If you've stayed away from smoking and stuck with your new diet plan for a month, you can return to a regular diet without adding inches to your waist and thighs. But why stop healthy diet? Once you quit smoking and started a healthy lifestyle, keep it up and eat healthier small meals as well as more fruit and veggies.
Thanks in advance
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If you've stayed away from smoking and stuck with your new diet plan for a month, you can return to a regular diet without adding inches to your waist and I may say "or" here instead of "and" but "and" isn't wrong thighs. But why stop your/the healthy diet? Once you quit smoking and started a healthy lifestyle, keep it up and eat healthier small meals , as well as more fruit and veggies.
- If you've stayed away from smoking and stuck with your new diet plan for a month, you can return to a regular diet without adding inches to your waist and I may say "or" here instead of "and" but "and" isn't wrong thighs.
- But why stop your/the healthy diet?
- Once you quit smoking and started a healthy lifestyle, keep it up and eat healthier small meals , as well as more fruit and veggies.
- Grammatically, it's not bad, but I don't really understand its logic.
- What if my "regular diet" consisted of huge ice cream sundaes every night?
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If you've stayed away from smoking and stuck with your new diet plan for a month, you can return to a regular diet without adding inches to your waist and I may say "or" here instead of "and" but "and" isn't wrong thighs. But why stop your/the healthy diet? Once you quit smoking and started a healthy lifestyle, keep it up and eat healthier small meals, as well as more fruit an
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Thank you very much! I can't say much for its logic myself 
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Hey how often you visit Pakistan?? Yeah I think situation will get better here by the end of 09....
Hahn there's no place like London, yeah you are rite weather is bit wet and cold…
Sooo what are ure activities after work…..
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I would strongly suggest staying away from chat language and always trying your best to write in standard English. Please realize that .... is not a substitue for a period to end a sentence.
"Hey" is an extremely informal greeting. What is "Yeah" in answer to? There was no intervening question.
"Hey" is an extremely informal greeting. What is "Yeah" in answer to? There was no intervening question.
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