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International community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuel e.g oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fossil fuel is a common concern of a great deal countries. So many people suppose that international community should control the amount of consumption of fossil fuel of each nation. Absolutely I agree with this idea.

It is true that fossil fuel plays an important role in all industries and it is the main fuel so that manufactures, vehicles, engines work. Because of excessively fossil fuel exploit, it is exhausting gradually, whilst renewable energies are expensive and not able to supply enough demand for all countries. Therefore, exhaustion of fossil fuel would make negative effects such as unemployment, unbalanced supply-demand, traveling difficulty. As a result, the economy could be regressed.

The second point people should concern that is the healthy and environmental problem impacted by using fossil fuel. its toxic wastes cause air and water pollution seriously. This leads to myriad diseases, thousand of killed organisms and directly influencing people’s health. Furthermore, carbon dioxin which is known as a product of the burning of fossil fuel is a greenhouse gas that contributes the global warming and climate change. These are alarming signs and it could happen in the near future.

Because of these above potential dangers, building an international community is necessary to solve the problems related to using fossil fuel. They could control the amount of fossil fuel that each nation consumes and impose restrictions on them. In addition, they could make good conditions to find and develop other energies that can be able to reuse such as solar, water and wind energy.