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I have studied at HN University for 3 weeks.Weekly is a different lesson. And it's very interesting.Week 1 I learned how to introduce myself, Week 2 I learned about the activities I do during my free time. Week 3 I learned how to make questions in English. Every week our teacher give homework to us, such as : make a video clip .That's the first time I have to make a video. It's too hard for me. I wrote my talk on paper and read it many times, when I mispronounced, I was very disappointed. then i shot video. I'm really not self-confident to stand in front of the camera. I shot over 30 video clips but I deleted all. because it's too bad. I started make it from Thursday. On that day, I got up at 6a.m. I brushed my teeth and ate breakfast. Then I shot a video. I didn't finish my video on that day. I'm really frustrated. The more think, the more disappointed. I feel bad. On Saturday, I finished my video clips. Although I am disappointed with it but I must submit my video clip for teacher on sunday . I don't have time. I reviewed my video many times, The form, content and pronunciation are very bad. my classmates read very well . I know I will have to try a lot. Now I must prepare for the video of week 3. I am trying to learn the pronunciation of speech to say better. Everythings would be more difficult if I didn't try to pass.