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Domdom Posted 9 years ago
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Can you check my English writing?

It could be a poem or song's lyrics! Thank you for reading and checking it!


I thought I was walking on the right road.

One day I felt pain from somewhere from my body.

So I looked down and found there weren't the legs on it.

I was waddling with just my worn body.


I thought I was very good at finding the right way by touching the wind with my finger.

One day I felt a very small whirlwind around my body.

So I looked around and found the wind that was running over me.

I was just pushed around here and there by the strong breeze.


I thought I was calling the right names.

One day I felt a silence surrounded me.

So I looked at myself in the mirror and found the beetles stucked in my ears.

Answers came over to / came for me and I never listened to them.



I thought I was watching the right movement(=clounds) to lead me in the sky

One day I felt a darkness in the side of my eyes.

So I looked up and found the smoke billowing from the burning mountains.

I was following the arcid clouds spreading upto the sky that never drifted but just disappeared in a minute.


I thought I was singing the right words in front of the door.

One day I felt a groan from my mouth.

So I look out and found a long wall without any windows was standing.

I was just shouting for help with my tonge that didn't load any sounds.


  
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