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Domdom Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you check my English writing?

I like to watch movies, write and imagine.
I'm very interested in learning english and how foreignes learn languages.
I'd like to travel all over the world in the future.
Because I believe travel only can change myself and my life. I'm waiting the time and myself changed. Emotion: smile
So if you ever traveled, tell me your travel story simply. And tell me your life story if you can. especially like special experiences. These will really make me feel happy. Because I really like to listen to people's story. And you can tell me your secret if you need someone to listen to the seceret kept inside you but there is nobody to listen around. Because I'm a stranger.Emotion: smile
I always think that it makes you feel easy to tell a stranger the sceret. Sometimes I feel I need someone who don't know me at all to tell him or her my secret.
Looking for someone to make me realise that my life is exciting!

*I don't like a post card with a picture of a flower.
*No running writing please. It makes me confused.
*Please put on the date on the post card.
  

Top answer

because I believe that only travelling can change me and my whole life.

  • because I believe that only travelling can change me and my whole life.
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because I believe that only travelling can change me and my whole life.
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Aren't there anything wrong except for "because I believe that only travelling can change me and my whole life"?

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