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Nalini Rajeev Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Can you check my English style

Can someone comment on my writing given below?


"I'm running but they can't see how far I've run

So I'll keep running even though the finish line hasn't been set

There is no end of the thing I've become-Nor to the state I want to embrace. "
  

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Nalini Rajeev I'm running but they can't see how far I've run So I'll keep running even though the finish line hasn't been set The English is correct, but sentences need full stops. Some people would put a comma after "running". I'm not sure whether these are supposed to be independent sentences or are supposed to follow in sequence.

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  • Nalini Rajeev I'm running but they can't see how far I've run So I'll keep running even though the finish line hasn't been set The English is correct, but sentences need full stops.
  • Some people would put a comma after "running".
  • I'm not sure whether these are supposed to be independent sentences or are supposed to follow in sequence.
  • If the former, "So" is probably incorrect as this word is used to join ideas, not introduce a new idea.
  • If the latter, why the new lines / blank lines?
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Nalini RajeevI'm running but they can't see how far I've run

So I'll keep running even though the finish line hasn't been set

The English is correct, but sentences need full stops. Some people would put a comma after "running".

I'm not sure whether these are supposed to be independent sentences or are supposed to follow in sequence. If the fo

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