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Kegiaumat Posted 14 years ago
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"Drinking less alcohol during pregnancy is enough to damage your baby's IQ

Just drink 1-2 glasses of wine a week during pregnancy can adversely affect a child's IQ, a study has confirmed.

The team from the University of Oxford and Bristol collects IQ scores of 4,000 children, as well as a antecedent of maternal alcohol use.

They found that pregnant women drinks alcohol moderately, from one to six cups per week, that will affect the baby's intelligence. According to experts, this effect is small, but they recommend that pregnant women should stay away from alcohol during pregnancy."

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I would write: "Drinking less alcohol during pregnancy is enough to damage your baby's IQ During pregnancy, just drink ing 1-2 glasses of wine a week can adversely affect a child's IQ, a study has confirmed. The team from the University of Oxford and Bristol collect ed the IQ scores of 4,000 children, as well as a antecedent the antecedents of maternal alcohol use. They found that pregnant women drinks alcohol moderately, from one to six cups per week, that will affect the baby's intelligence .

  • I would write: "Drinking less alcohol during pregnancy is enough to damage your baby's IQ During pregnancy, just drink ing 1-2 glasses of wine a week can adversely affect a child's IQ, a study has confirmed.
  • The team from the University of Oxford and Bristol collect ed the IQ scores of 4,000 children, as well as a antecedent the antecedents of maternal alcohol use.
  • They found that pregnant women drinks alcohol moderately, from one to six cups per week, that will affect the baby's intelligence .
  • They found that for pregnant women, moderate consumption of alcohol as in one to six cups per week is still so much as to affect the baby's intelligence.
  • "
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I would write:

"Drinking less alcohol during pregnancy is enough to damage your baby's IQ
During pregnancy, just drinking 1-2 glasses of wine a week can adversely affect a child's IQ, a study has confirmed.
The team from the University of Oxford and Bristol collected the IQ
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