Can you check me these following sentences. Thank s lot.
30. This course require reading a larger number of books. 31. Thinking of dying soon, he wants to return the home. 32. The young boy leaves the home, hoping to find a job in the city. 33. These are beautiful pictures displaying all Halong Bay. 34. Having finished its sixth orbit, Gagarin begins to send radial signals to the earth. 35. Having dropped drow the bombs, the jet-plane return immediately with a full of speed. 36. Taking his body temperature, the nurse star taking care of him. 37. Gathering military force, Le Loi won his enemy in Chi Lang. 38. The man carrying fruits for the company receiving a high salary. 39. After deciding to become a diplomat, John begins to study the three lanluages. 40. Everyone wanting to research science has to have the knowdege of advanced mathematics. 41. Smoke emitting from the car engine and the chimneys of factories is the major source of pollution. 42. Finishing going to the station, I met my parents. 43. Guiding a football team is a complex job. 44. Pele stopped directing the football team. 45. The function of the satellite is researching natural resources on the earth’s face. 46. Learning while watching television is not effective. 47. My friend like doing difficlut Maths exercises. 48. Solving Maths exercises takes a deal number of time. 49. Studying Medicine is my brother’s dream. 50. My friend does not like studying Medicine. 51. You can power the machine by pressing this shutton. 52. Swimming before the breafast is good for your health. 53. I am afraid of swimming before the breakfast. 54. Taking people to the moon and bring them back is possible in this 20th century. 55. Fighting the enemy and protecting this country is the major duty of the young people. 56. Painting and writing is the job requiring patient and creativity. 57. We always avoid polluting the environment. 58. In many countries in Europe and America, the law forbids polluting the environment. 59. Learning about distinguishing types of birds is very difficult. 60. These are the pictures taken from a satellite.
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I have underlined some problem areas: 30. This course require reading a larger number of books. 31.
— Mister Micawber
I have underlined some problem areas: 30.
This course require reading a larger number of books.
31.
Thinking of dying soon, he wants to return the home.
32.
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30. This course require reading a larger number of books. 31. Thinking of dying soon, he wants to return the home. 32. The young boy leaves the home, hoping to find a job in the city. 33. These are beautiful pictures displayingall Halong Bay. 34. Having finished its sixth orbit, Gagarin
Thanh you very much. I cannot stand myself as I usually make the same mistakes. I will try more and more ^^.
30. This courserequires reading a larger number of books. 31. Thinking of dying soon, he wants to returnthehome. 32. The young boy leaves thehome, hopin
32. The young boy is leaving / left / has left home, hoping to find a job in the city. 33. These are beautiful pictures showing/depicting all of Halong Bay. 34. Having finished his sixth orbit, Gagarin begins to send radio signals to the earth. 35. Having dropped the bombs, the jet planes returned immediately at full speed. 36. Having taken
In #34. I think Gagarin is just the name of a satellite. Why do you use "his", not "its"? In # 41 and # 45 Please show me how to write by using V-ing phrase as Adjective? In #33 Why cannot I use "display" or "present"?
In #34. I think Gagarin is just the name of a satellite. Why do you use "his", not "its"?- Yuri Gagarin, was a famous astronaut, the first human into space. In # 41 and # 45 Please show me how to write by using V-ing phrase as Adjective?--That is your problem, not mine; in many cases, a V-ing phrase is just not natural. I am just correcting your sentences.
I have no idea of asking you to show me how to write sentences by using V-ing phrases. My requirements are just in #41 and #45. ^^. I am afraid that you thought I gave absurd suggestions. You don't imagine how I appriciate your help. With your support, I have been able to make many progress in learning English.