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Pauline.m Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Can you check it for me? formal letter to a university
Dear Mr. *****
I am interested in applying for admission to the Media and Cultural Studies (MCS) at Middlesex University.
I will graduate in 2007, in Poland where I live, with International Baccalaureate Diploma which covers the following subjects:
1) Polish Language (Higher Level)
2) English Language (Higher Level)
3) History (Standard Level)
4) Psychology (Higher Level)
5) Biology (Standard Level)
6) Mathematics Studies
In that case I have few questions connected with course which I have choosen. Is there any need of an additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course? What is the level of points needed to apply?
Knowing the answer to these questions will allow me to more effectively plan for my future.
Right now, I am really interested in media. I work in the redaction of our new, school web – site. What more I have just received Middle Years Programme Certificate with grade 7 ( 0-7 scale) from Personal Project. The biggest part of my work was the exhibition of photos which were made by myself.
I look forward to receiving your reply. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Paulina M.
I know that there are many mistakes in grammar, and language... I still learn
so I hope you will help me a bit 
paulina m.
I am interested in applying for admission to the Media and Cultural Studies (MCS) at Middlesex University.
I will graduate in 2007, in Poland where I live, with International Baccalaureate Diploma which covers the following subjects:
1) Polish Language (Higher Level)
2) English Language (Higher Level)
3) History (Standard Level)
4) Psychology (Higher Level)
5) Biology (Standard Level)
6) Mathematics Studies
In that case I have few questions connected with course which I have choosen. Is there any need of an additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course? What is the level of points needed to apply?
Knowing the answer to these questions will allow me to more effectively plan for my future.
Right now, I am really interested in media. I work in the redaction of our new, school web – site. What more I have just received Middle Years Programme Certificate with grade 7 ( 0-7 scale) from Personal Project. The biggest part of my work was the exhibition of photos which were made by myself.
I look forward to receiving your reply. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Paulina M.
I know that there are many mistakes in grammar, and language... I still learn
so I hope you will help me a bit paulina m.
Top answer
Hi, Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit. I have few questions connected with the application process for this course. Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course?
- Hi, Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit.
- I have few questions connected with the application process for this course.
- Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course?
- How may points do I need to apply?
- Knowing the answer to these questions will allow me to more effectively plan for my future.
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Hi,
Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit.
I have few questions connected with the application process for this course. Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course? How may points do I need to apply?
Knowing the answer to these questions will allow me to more effectively plan for my futu
Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit.
I have few questions connected with the application process for this course. Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course? How may points do I need to apply?
Knowing the answer to these questions will allow me to more effectively plan for my futu
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Thank you
I used this word - 'redaction' by mistake - I thought it is the simmilar word as in polish
I used this word - 'redaction' by mistake - I thought it is the simmilar word as in polish
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