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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the society, young people spend too much of their free time in shopping centers, other people think that this have disadvantage to their life. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, the negatives of sepend free time in shopping malls are as equally as the disadvantages of sepend free time in smartphone. Firstly, health of people decrease daily. Because, young people only waste their time in such places, they will be less likely to participate in outdoor activities with their friends or family, this may affect their health and reduce the quality time for their social relationships in the long run. Secondly, finacial people will decline routine, if they spend too much time in shopping centers. People always feel lack of money, for example, my friend extremely liked shopping malls, she bought too much anything in there,so she did not have money payment and, she loaned whoever lived together a building.

On the other hand, there have benefits from shopping malls. People can reduce stress at working environment. They feel stressful from workload, or a relationship colleague, so they need some places is shopping center which make them feel relax, and comfortable. Moreover, shopping also means amusement in which people visit some shopping places to gather with family or friends. They just tend to spend their time in the lovely places which provide a lot of entertainments, thus they can enjoy their leisure time with full of joy and fun.

In conclusion, there have both disadvantage and advantage from spending free time in shopping malls. People should consider certainly, and be useful their finaces.

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