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The story just happened ,I went to my friend's birthday party. I broke my glasses so I didn't wear it . There was a girl held a glass of beer went to the restroom . I think she probably came to call her friend ,but when I was out of the restroom I bumped into her . I apologize to her but she still scolded me . That was the starting point that I met her for the first time
Is it ok , you can help me correct it
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I highlighted places that you need to correct. If you have questions, please ask. The story just happene d ,I went to my friend's birthday party.
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- The story just happene d ,I went to my friend's birthday party.
- I broke my glasses so I didn't wear it .
- There was a girl held a glass of beer went to the restroo m .
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The story just happened ,I went to my friend's birthday party. I broke my glasses so I didn't wear it . There was a girl held a glass of beer
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