Can you chech these these sentencese? Thanks alot..

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61. The cabbages planted in Da lat are exported to Hong Kong and France.
62. The cars manufactured in Japan are cheaper than in Europe.
63. Having been directed by radar, the pilot landed safely in bad weather.
64. “ The Old man and the Sea” written by Hemingway is very good.
65. The products manufatured have good quality.
66. These are the three students recruited among the most talented students.
67. Penicllin invented by doctor Fleming has been saved millions people’s life.
68. Glass is made of sand, soda and lime.
69. Columbus had to use the prisoners released from prisons to set sailors.
70. Cellulose is a substance found easily in nature, plants and fruits.
71. Rome, Paris and London are the big cities visisted by a lot of the millions people every years.
72. The Second World War started in 1939 and finished in 1945 caused of the dead of millions people all over the world.
73. Petroleum and gasolin are the two fuel taken from crude oil.
74. Movies is a types of the Art loved by millions people all over the world.
75. The energy emitted by the sun can boilt water and operate engines.
76. To take people and equipment to the bottom of the sea is possibe.
77. To talk to him is to like him
78. Her hope is to pass the next exam.
79. To follow this training course takes 6 months.
80. To know the past helps us to predict the future.
81. To study and labour well is a daily work, to be small but to be important to the boys as well as the girls.
82. Catalyst has function to step up the chemical process.
83. The purpose of the poet is to find the beauty of nature.
84. To accept her invitation is up to you.
85. The best way to rescue the child is to throw him a ball.
86. To build a new electricity power station is accepted.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

61. The cabbages planted in Da lat are exported to Hong Kong and France.

64. “ The Old man and the Sea” written by Hemingway is very good.
65. The products manufatured have good quality.
66. These are the three students recruited among the most talented ~~students~~.
67. Penicllin invented by doctor Fleming has been saved millions people’s life.

69. Columbus had to use the prisoners released from prisons to set sailors.
70. Cellulose is a substance found easily in nature, plants and fruits.
71. Rome, Paris and London are the big cities visisted by a lot of the millions people every years.
72. The Second World War started in 1939 and finished in 1945 caused of the dead of millions people all over the world.
73. Petroleum and gasolin are the two fuel taken from crude oil.
74. Movies is a types of the Art loved by millions people all over the world.
75. The energy emitted by the sun can boilt water and operate engines.
76. To take people and equipment to the bottom of the sea is possibe.

79. ~~To follow~~ this training course takes 6 months.

81. To study and labour well is a daily work, to be small but to be important to the boys as well as the girls.
82. Catalyst has function to step up the chemical process.
83. The purpose of the poet is to find the beauty of nature.
84. To accept her invitation is up to you.

86. To build a new electricity power station is accepted.

Tensai103 · Answer

61. The cabbages planted in Da Lat are exported to Hong Kong and France.

64. “ The Old man and the Sea” novel written by Hemingway is very good.
65. The products manufactured have good quality.

67. Penicillin invented by Dr. Fleming has been saving millions of people’s lives.

69. Columbus had to use the prisoners released from prisons to set sailors.
70. Cellulose is a substance found easily in nature, plants and fruits.
71. Rome, Paris and London are the big cities visited by millions of people every year.
72. The Second World War started in 1939 and finished in 1945 was a cause of the dead of millions of people all over the world.
73. Petroleum and gasoline are the two types of liquid fuel taken from crude oil.
74. Movies is a type of art loved by millions of people all over the world.
75. The energy emitted by the sun can boil water and operate engines.
76. To take people and equipment to the bottom of the sea is possible.

81. To study and labour well is daily work, small but important to ~~the~~ boys as well as ~~the~~ girls.
82. The function of catalyst is to promote chemical process.
83. The purpose of the poet is to discover the beauty of nature.
84. To accept her invitation is up to you.

86. To build a new electricity power station is approved / accepted. ( # 84 and # 86: What wrong with "accept"?)^^

^^ Thank you very much

Mister Micawber · Answer

64. “ The Old man and the Sea”, written by Hemingway, is very good.-- Commas are important.
67. Penicillin, invented by Dr. Fleming, has been saving millions of people’s lives.
69. Columbus had to use prisoners released from prisons to set sail.
70. Cellulose is a substance found easily in nature.
71. Rome, Paris and London are big cities visited by millions of people every year.
72. The Second World War, started in 1939 and ended in 1945, was a cause of the death of millions of people all over the world.
73. Petroleum and gasoline are two types of liquid fuel produced from crude oil.
74. Movies are a type of art loved by millions of people all over the world.

81. To study and labour well is daily work, small but important to boys as well as girls.
82. The function of a catalyst is to promote a chemical process.

84. Accepting her invitation is up to you.
86. A new electrical power station has been approved.

Tensai103 · Answer

Dear Mister.

Can you check these sentences? Thanks a lot.

Scientists are impatient/overhasting to find a vaccine against SIDA.
We are sad to hear the news about the death of Prime Minister Rajiv Ghandi.
The company doubled the invested capital in effort to promote domestic automobile manufacture .
Jeese works day and night to support his family.
There are many difficulties to overcome and many things to finish.
The sodiers are impatient to occupy the lost defence line.
The law to force people to drives on the right hand originated from the Age of Napoleon. ( Can I say the Napoleon’s Age?)
The Hitler’s ambition to conquer all of Europe totally failed.
These are home exercises for pupils to do.
Tam moves the newspaper for people to read.
I bought two tickets for my parents to travel to Da Lat.
There are several minutes for the astronaut to walk in the space.
In Ho Chi Minh city, there are many good cities for travelers to choose.
The plan for the factory to produce 30.000 automobiles every year há been approved.
This is the best time for children to go to school.
I gave you the book to read in the whole journey.
The experiment for a satellite to rescue another satellite in the space succeded.
The plan for Mr Smith to replace Mr Joh seems great.
The preparation for the leaders of Europe, America and Japan to meet together has a wrong problem.
Mr Thompson has a wish for his son to study medicines in France.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Scientists are impatient/overhasting to find a vaccine against SIDA.
The company doubled the invested capital in effort to promote domestic automobile manufacture .
The sodiers are impatient to occupy the lost defence line.
The law to force people to drives on the right hand originated from the Age of Napoleon. ( Can I say the Napoleon’s Age?--No.)
The Hitler’s ambition to conquer all of Europe totally failed.
Tam moves the newspaper for people to read.
There are several minutes for the astronaut to walk in the space.
In Ho Chi Minh city, there are many good cities for travelers to choose.
The plan for the factory to produce 30.000 automobiles every year há been approved.
I gave you the book to read in the whole journey.
The experiment for a satellite to rescue another satellite in the space succeded.
The preparation for the leaders of Europe, America and Japan to meet together has a wrong problem.
Mr Thompson has a wish for his son to study medicines in France.

Tensai103 · Answer

Scientists are impatient/~~overhasting~~ to find a vaccine against SIDA.
The company doubled the invested capital with effort to promote domestic automobile manufacture .
The soldiers are impatient to occupy the lost defence line.
The law to force people to drive on the right hand originated from the Age of Napoleon. ( Can I say the Napoleon’s Age?--No.)
Hitler’s ambition to conquer all of Europe totally failed.
Tam moves the newspaper for people to read.
There are several minutes for the astronaut to walk in space.
In Ho Chi Minh City, there are many good places for travelers to choose.
The plan for the factory to produce 30.000 automobiles every year has been approved.
I gave you the book to read in all the journey.
The experiment for a satellite to rescue another satellite in the space succeeded.
The preparation for the leaders of Europe, America and Japan to meet together has a wrong problem. (this phrase wrong cause "probel" is uncountable? Right? )
Mr Thompson has a wish for his son to study Medicines in France

^^ Thanks you very much

Mister Micawber · Answer

Scientists are impatient/overhasty to find a vaccine against SIDA.
The company doubled the invested capital in an effort to promote domestic automobile manufacture.
Tam sells (?) the newspaper for people to read.
I gave you the book to read during the journey.
The preparation for the leaders of Europe, America and Japan to meet has a problem. (this phrase wrong cause "problem" is uncountable? Right?- No. 'Problem' = 'wrong' )
Mr Thompson has a wish for his son to study medicine in France.

Tensai103 · Answer

Dear Mister.

In #12, Why cannot use the preposition "together"?
In #6, my mean is that Miss Tam hold the newspaper and she had to give it to another person to read. Which vocabulary I can use in this case?

Can you check me these sentences?

Most of the people play tennis to practice, entertain and communicate.
Please let me know where you want to go, why you decide to go, what you are going to and when you come back.
The solar energy can use in telephone communication, in agriculture and even in space exploration.
Everyday children just do the simple work such as protecting the plants, preserveing the school furniture, helping their parents in the family.
The functions of High Command of Air Force are counter- attacking the attack of the enemy’s planes, supporting the infantry and patroling the homeland’s sky.
Environmental conservation consists of preserving natural resources and avoiding environmental pollution.
We need a leader having enough intelligence to make right decisions, brave to make daring decisions and sharp to make quick decisions.
He finds a happiness in reading books, writing and working in flower garden.
If you want to pass the next exam,you will have to be studious, patient and conclusive.
Botanists research plants on the earth’s surface - where they are, how they contact together, and what fruits are the same.
He comes to that conclusion because of what he heard and really saw.
Neither the sun or the Mars have no the atmosphere.
He refused to not only meet us but alsowrite letter to us.
I go to university to acquire the knowledge, to make new friends and to equip myself with a career.
David lasts through John both maths and physics.
The driver gives neither his mistakes nor his fixing damage.
Both children and adults are sastisfactory the way of the performance
I go by either taxi or a bus.
Either you have to study hard or you will not pass the next exam.
His speeches is not only accurate but also unnecessary.

Mister Micawber · Answer

In #12, Why cannot use the preposition "together"? -- That is an adverb, not a preposition, and it is redundant in that sentence: holding a meeting includes the idea of 'together' of course.

In #6, my mean is that Miss Tam hold the newspaper and she had to give it to another person to read. Which vocabulary I can use in this case?-- Well, that is a very odd thing for Miss Tam to do. Is that her job, holding papers? You have used simple present tense again, which mean that it is something that she always does.

I have underlined some problems below:

Most of the people play tennis to practice, entertain and communicate.
Please let me know where you want to go, why you decide to go, what you are going to and when you come back.
The solar energy can use in telephone communication, in agriculture and even in space exploration.
Everyday children just do the simple work such as protecting the plants, preserveing the school furniture, helping their parents in the family.
The functions of High Command of Air Force are counter- attacking the attack of the enemy’s planes, supporting the infantry and patroling the homeland’s sky.
We need a leader having enough intelligence to make right decisions, brave to make daring decisions and sharp to make quick decisions.
He finds a happiness in reading books, writing and working in flower garden.
If you want to pass the next exam,you will have to be studious, patient and conclusive.
Botanists research plants ~~on the earth’s surface~~ - where they are, how they contact together, and what fruits are the same.
He comes to that conclusion because of what he heard and ~~really~~ saw.
Neither the sun or the Mars have no the atmosphere.
He refused to not only meet us but also write letter to us.
I go to university to acquire the knowledge, to make new friends and to equip myself with a career.
David lasts through John both maths and physics.
The driver gives neither his mistakes nor his fixing damage. ????
Both children and adults are sastisfactory the way of the performance ????
I go by either taxi or a bus.
His speeches is not only accurate but also unnecessary.

Tensai103 · Answer

Dear Mister ^^ Do you have you a good day? I hope so. Today I feel happier than yesterday because I have learned a lot the English vacabularies.
These are my revised sentences. Thank you very much.

Most of the people play tennis to practice, to entertain and to communicate.
Please let me know where you want to go, why you decide to go, what you are going to, and when you will come back.
~~The~~ solar energy can be used in telephone communication, in agriculture and even in space exploration.
Every day children just do the simple work such as protecting the plants, preserving the school furniture and helping their parents. ~~in the family.~~
The functions of Air Force High Command are counter- attacking the attack of the enemy’s planes, supporting the infantry and patroling the homeland’s sky.
We need a leader ~~having~~ who has enough intelligence to make right decisions, enough brave to make daring decisions and enough sharp to make quick decisions.
He finds the happiness in reading books, writing and working in the flower garden.
If you want to pass the next exam,you will have to be studious, patient and positive.
Botanists research plants ~~on the earth’s surface~~ - where they are, how they contact each other and what fruits are the same.
He came to that conclusion because of what he heard and ~~really~~ saw.
Neither the sun nor the Mars have ~~no the~~ the atmosphere.
He refused not only to meet us but also to write the letter to us.
I go to university to acquire ~~the~~ knowledge, to make new friends and to equip myself with a career.
David pass John both maths and physics.
The driver did not give both his mistakes and the damage fixing. ????
Both children and adults are satisfied by the performance.
I go by either taxi or a bus.
His speeches are not only accurate but also unnecessary

Can you chech these these sentencese? Thanks alot..

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