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Damians1987 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can You be so kind and check it for me, please
Can anyone be so kind to check this for me, please. I have a hard exam in two days and I have to know if I will make it or not. Thanks,
Damians1987
Name: x
Style: MLA
Audience: Lecturers, Students
Word limit: 450
The World Econmy at Risk
The world economy is at risk because of the growing fear of the second crissis in the U.S. The problem is whether much of the world economy will be pulled down again. That is why there ought to be found an alternative for the U.S. Economy in which consumers and investors are assured of their position in a workplace and a market.
According to The Times there is a possibility of "a return to negative GDP growth" (The Times, 2010). The unstable economy may face another crisis which "could pull much of the world into recession" (The Times) again. It has been investigated that "economists generally put the risk of a U.S. double dip at somewhere between 20% and 35%" (The Times).
The U.S., as one of the largest consumption markets in the world, faces problems. Consumers do not want to spend money and to buy things on credit as they fear of losing work because of the crissis and bankrupting companies. That is the reason why retailers not only in the U.S. but also in other countries suffer consequences of the situation.
Stagnation in the U.S. grows as investors and managers do not want to invest and hire new employees. The fear of wasting money on an unprofitable investment paralizes the market from head to toe. Furthermore, it is building an image os a country without a prospect of better tomorrow.
First remedy for the world economy problem may be a growing strenght of BRICS (Brazil, Russia, India, China) countries. This could be an alternative for the deteriorating situation in the U.S. The countries ought to receive more of an international attention to support the stability of the world market. That is because "BRIC growth increasingly makes U.S. growth shortfalls in the years ahead less of a threat for the world economy" writes The Times.
Growing consumption problem may be faced by the BRIC countries. With their "consumption growing by roughly 15% per year" (The Times 03) they create a basis for a future consumer market giant. Developing that fast may cause those countries to leave the U.S. economy behind in approximately a decade.
The BRIC countries form a fast growing organizm which is capable of providing work opportunities for many people. Unless the situation deteriorates, new investors may build properly prosparing companies. This is because of retailers having distinct situation on a market.
All things considered, the world economy may be at risk of the second recession in the U.S. The problem, however, can be solved with some alternative options. The BRIC countries provide a great views for the future wobbly economy, consumers, investors, and retailers.
Bibliography
surname, name. "Can World Economy Keep Growing if U.S. Doesn't?." The Times Volume number Sep. 2010:page number.
Damians1987
Name: x
Style: MLA
Audience: Lecturers, Students
Word limit: 450
The World Econmy at Risk
The world economy is at risk because of the growing fear of the second crissis in the U.S. The problem is whether much of the world economy will be pulled down again. That is why there ought to be found an alternative for the U.S. Economy in which consumers and investors are assured of their position in a workplace and a market.
According to The Times there is a possibility of "a return to negative GDP growth" (The Times, 2010). The unstable economy may face another crisis which "could pull much of the world into recession" (The Times) again. It has been investigated that "economists generally put the risk of a U.S. double dip at somewhere between 20% and 35%" (The Times).
The U.S., as one of the largest consumption markets in the world, faces problems. Consumers do not want to spend money and to buy things on credit as they fear of losing work because of the crissis and bankrupting companies. That is the reason why retailers not only in the U.S. but also in other countries suffer consequences of the situation.
Stagnation in the U.S. grows as investors and managers do not want to invest and hire new employees. The fear of wasting money on an unprofitable investment paralizes the market from head to toe. Furthermore, it is building an image os a country without a prospect of better tomorrow.
First remedy for the world economy problem may be a growing strenght of BRICS (Brazil, Russia, India, China) countries. This could be an alternative for the deteriorating situation in the U.S. The countries ought to receive more of an international attention to support the stability of the world market. That is because "BRIC growth increasingly makes U.S. growth shortfalls in the years ahead less of a threat for the world economy" writes The Times.
Growing consumption problem may be faced by the BRIC countries. With their "consumption growing by roughly 15% per year" (The Times 03) they create a basis for a future consumer market giant. Developing that fast may cause those countries to leave the U.S. economy behind in approximately a decade.
The BRIC countries form a fast growing organizm which is capable of providing work opportunities for many people. Unless the situation deteriorates, new investors may build properly prosparing companies. This is because of retailers having distinct situation on a market.
All things considered, the world economy may be at risk of the second recession in the U.S. The problem, however, can be solved with some alternative options. The BRIC countries provide a great views for the future wobbly economy, consumers, investors, and retailers.
Bibliography
surname, name. "Can World Economy Keep Growing if U.S. Doesn't?." The Times Volume number Sep. 2010:page number.
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HI Damians1987; I've made some suggestions. It would help to organize your writing in paragraphs. S.
- HI Damians1987; I've made some suggestions.
- It would help to organize your writing in paragraphs.
- S.
- The problem is whether much of the world economy will be pulled down again.
- S.
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HI Damians1987;
I've made some suggestions. It would help to organize your writing in paragraphs.
The world economy is at risk because of the growing fear of a second crissis (sp.) in the U.S. The problem is whether much of the world economy will be pulled down again. That is why there ought to be found an alternative (course, policy?) for the U.S. econom
I've made some suggestions. It would help to organize your writing in paragraphs.
The world economy is at risk because of the growing fear of a second crissis (sp.) in the U.S. The problem is whether much of the world economy will be pulled down again. That is why there ought to be found an alternative (course, policy?) for the U.S. econom
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Thanks, you helped me a lot. I will have two more fruits of my work so if you have two minutes to check them for me later on I will be grateful
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