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Dwi bayu Posted 13 years ago
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can you all check my writing? thanks ^^
Good Evening Everyone and Happy Sunday!!
I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now in Padang. I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfhearted. -_-. I still need a holiday anyway. Deal with it!! I said to myself. LOL
Today it was a bit tiring day. but before going further , I would like to tell you this dawn was my first time went to the mosque for Subuh praying. Congratulation!! Even I still felt sleepy, I woke up and i also woke my friend up to go there. that was really great effort.
Then, We went to go around this city to look for job vacancy. We have been dropped by at some English courses and they asked us to give them our CV. Unfortunately, we have not made it yet. But we will make it soon and go back in hoping they will call us for the job. ^^
I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now in Padang. I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfhearted. -_-. I still need a holiday anyway. Deal with it!! I said to myself. LOL
Today it was a bit tiring day. but before going further , I would like to tell you this dawn was my first time went to the mosque for Subuh praying. Congratulation!! Even I still felt sleepy, I woke up and i also woke my friend up to go there. that was really great effort.
Then, We went to go around this city to look for job vacancy. We have been dropped by at some English courses and they asked us to give them our CV. Unfortunately, we have not made it yet. But we will make it soon and go back in hoping they will call us for the job. ^^
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Hi dwi bayu, Please see my comments below to improve your writing: Good Evening Everyone and Happy Sunday!! I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now (present tense- "I am now in my flat in Padang") in Padang. I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfhearted.
- Hi dwi bayu, Please see my comments below to improve your writing: Good Evening Everyone and Happy Sunday!!
- I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now (present tense- "I am now in my flat in Padang") in Padang.
- I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfhearted.
- (I'm not sure this is the word you want- "half-hearted" means you do something without much effort or care- do you mean a "heavy heart"?
- This means you are sad) -_-.
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Hi dwi bayu,
Please see my comments below to improve your writing:
Good Evening Everyone and Happy Sunday!!
I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now (present tense- "I am now in my flat in Padang") in Padang. I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfheart
Please see my comments below to improve your writing:
Good Evening Everyone and Happy Sunday!!
I just want to tell you all that I have been in my flat now (present tense- "I am now in my flat in Padang") in Padang. I arrived here 5 days ago with a halfheart
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