Can we write it in a better way...please help

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From elaborate silver to minimalistic steel, cutlery has come a long way! #LuxeTravel

Antique Victorian sterling silver… to rustic Boho knife and spoon, cutlery has seen many a travels.

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Suitcases as they were and they are now! #LuxeTravel

Those times when nudging the bulk was in to tossing the concise

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Doctor D · Accepted Answer

Here are my suggestions:

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From ~~elaborate~~ ornate silver to minimalistic steel, cutlery has come a long way! #LuxeTravel
[ornate vs unadorned OR elaborate vs simple--these are better contrasts.]

Antique Victorian sterling silver… to rustic Boho knife and spoon, cutlery has seen many a ~~travels~~ change [?] OR cutlery has undergone a transformation OR seen many changes OR?
[It is unclear what you want to say here, so I have only offered suggestions about the last of the sentence.]

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Suitcases as they ~~were~~ used to be and they are now! #LuxeTravel

Those times when nudging the bulk was in to tossing the concise

I hope this helps. Reply if you need more detail.

Creativeguru · Answer

Thanks a lot. I will let you know, if at all I need your valuable suggestions.

Can we write it in a better way...please help

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