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Caeser Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

CAN WE CORRECT IT LIKE THIS

In the German version of "Cinderella", one of the cruel stepsisters had cut her toes off, so that the slipper would fit her foot.


Can we correct the mistake of verb tense in the above mentioned sentence as follows,

In the German version of "Cinderella", one of the cruel stepsisters cut her toes off, so that the slipper would fit her foot.

  

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It sounds OK to me. I wonder whether you really need the comma before "so". I'm not sure it is a "correction", because both versions seem all right.

  • It sounds OK to me.
  • I wonder whether you really need the comma before "so".
  • I'm not sure it is a "correction", because both versions seem all right.
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It sounds OK to me. I wonder whether you really need the comma before "so".

I'm not sure it is a "correction", because both versions seem all right.

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